I believe what you published was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not saying your information isn’t good, but suppose you added a headline that makes people desire
more? I mean 初汤|潮菜若无初汤，全个堵唔缀…… –
外埔乡·好初汤 is a little plain. You should
peek at Yahoo’s home page and see how they create post headlines to
grab people to open the links. You might try adding a video
or a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you’ve written. In my opinion, it
would bring your posts a little bit more interesting.
I believe what you published was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not saying your information isn’t good, but suppose you added a headline that makes people desire
more? I mean 初汤|潮菜若无初汤，全个堵唔缀…… –
外埔乡·好初汤 is a little plain. You should
peek at Yahoo’s home page and see how they create post headlines to
grab people to open the links. You might try adding a video
or a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you’ve written. In my opinion, it
would bring your posts a little bit more interesting.
谢谢提醒，我尝试下